Category: Writers Block
This was written by a friend of mine. Wanna no what you all think.
How I feel
Her hair is so lovely long and brown,
and to know her who could frown?
Her voice is soft and sweet like that of a dove,
she could light a room with her wonderful love,
with out her my life was dark and gray,
but to hear her smile brings the light of day.
I can sense that sparkle in her eyes,
and her happiness is as wonderful as a sunrise.
And only if you could hear her sing,
the sound is as sweet as a flowing stream.
Her laughter is true and from the heart,
and I hope we never do part.
Oh to spend time with her is so grand,
I hope for the day we walk hand in hand.
Oh how true love is more precious than gold,
I simply long for her to hold.
She is like a song in my heart and a sparkle in my eyes,
to me mor beautiful than a sunrise.
She makes me feel happy and bold,
with her I hope to grow old.
She fillls my heart with happiness and bliss,
Oh how I long for her sweet kiss.
Like a candle in the darkness she lights my way,
with her I long to spend each day.
I long to put a smile on her beautiful face,
and also to feel her loving embrace
...altogether lovely...
it is lovely as Conny said, maybe I just have a thing against poems that rhyme. It is great, but tell your friend to be more free in their writing. Not every two lines have to rhyme. It is a great poem though, very pretty
Thank you. I thought it was kind of nice.